Analysis of Love Bleeds



Bittersweet tears slide down your sun worn skin, mascara runs cold and bleeds me, warm sun showers and falling stars lull you to sleep, walking through the beauty of a deep daydream, smoky kisses laced with ashes and nicotine, your ruby shaped lips so soft and sweet, you taste of everything I need, the nights bleed quiet stillness of us, take a deep breath as the days are perfect moments and chaotic sentiments.

Are you lost or happy? distant or close. am I good enough or apart of your dreams? those delicate rose petal eyes glisten with beauty and drown in a shallow pool of pain and sadness, I hold on to every strand of love you've given me, break me open, uncover me piece by piece, I want to wrap myself around your pale shadow, unravel each emotion so I can feel all of your layers beneath, so close, yet so far out of reach.


Scheme X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111110101101111100101111110101010111010111001011011110111110110111010111011101101100010100 11111010111110110111111001101101100100101110101111100111110111100101111111110111101010101111111100111111111
Characters 836
Words 158
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 330
Words per line (avg) 78
Letters per stanza (avg) 330
Words per stanza (avg) 78

About this poem

I wrote this poem a few weeks ago, I love the way it came out!

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Written on April 28, 2022

Submitted by musichead26 on June 01, 2022

Modified on March 12, 2023

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