Analysis of His Return



Don't you think it's time
For God's Son to return,
Don't you think it's time
For God's Son to return ?
like people killing each other, like it's no crime,
Countries needs a champion to stop the acts of wanton

Ever since Cain's famous words
"Am I my brother's keeper" ?
The world sets no real standards
Evil kills, not guns should be our healer !

Live and let live some say
But we need laws to protect us all.
Are we just bodies with no feelings or a hunk of clay ?
73 million abortion last year, are we like  paper dolls ?

Is life precious anymore ?
I always thought love conquers all,
Living a life of 4 score  and more
Should be our aim and not a pitfall !

Evil reigns with all of us in the world,
It is winning all the battles of war,
Agape love is the answer for the battled,
Love from God, so sacrificial and exhibits action !

Agape love is a selfless love,
Putting others ahead of yourself,
It is not a feeling, we are to be imitators of God,
Reading the Bible is one thing, but doing it is another !

So agape love is built on other's needs,
You don't really give until it hurts,
It is better to give than receive
A worker not ashamed for the effort !

For whosoever shall give a cup of water in my name
Because he belongs to Christ
He shall not lose his reward ! Matt 10 : 42


Scheme ABABac dede fgfx hghg xhxc xxxe xxxx xxx
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111101 11111 111101 110101101111 10101001101110 1011101 1111010 0111110 10111111010 101111 111110111 11110111010111 1001011111101 111001 1111101 10011101 111010101 1011111001 1110101011 01110101010 1111010001010 01110101 101001101 111010111110011 1001011111011010 1011111101 111010111 111011101 0101011010 10101101110011 0110111 11111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,289
Words 276
Sentences 13
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 33

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Our world is so wicked, is it not time for Jesus 's return ?

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Written on May 31, 2022

Submitted by Dougla$Irishman on May 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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