Analysis of Memories



While it's true, we all have memories, have you ever wondered why‐
Some memories are like a breeze, but some others just won't die‐

There's memories of good times, and some that weren't so good ‐
Memories of the times we've fell, and off the times we've stood ‐

Some memories can make our heart race ‐ with the freedom of the sky ‐
Some can make us laugh ‐ while others make us cry ‐

And it seems we can't pick and choose the ones we want to keep ‐
They're tucked away inside our mind where memories run deep‐

And we all have special memories, ones that we hold dear ‐
Of a special person, place, or event ‐ that made us laugh or eased our fear‐

And I have a special memory of a person that I knew ‐
Who loved me unconditionally and cared about the things I'd do ‐

This special person was my mother, and though her body's gone ‐
Her spirits with me always ‐ like the words of a lingering song ‐

And like a song, she'll live forever‐ locked away in my memory –
Her smiling face, her easy grace ‐ and her spirit that's now set free‐

And like a song that has an ending ‐ but we sing again and again ‐
Or a story that we read and re‐read ‐ even tho we know the end ‐

Her memory is no less beautiful ‐ even `tho now she is gone ‐
She's now listening and waiting ‐ with the angels, in her eternal home ‐


Scheme AA BB AA CC DD EE FX GG XX FX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111001110101 110011011110111 11001110111011 10010111010111 11001110111010101 11111110111 01111101011111 110101101110011 01111010011111 1010101101111111101 0110101001010111 1110100001010111 110101110010101 010111101101001 01011101010101100 0101010100101111 01011111011101001 10101110111011101 01001111001011111 111000101010000101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,368
Words 276
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 27

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Written on September 14, 2000

Submitted by long6806 on May 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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