Analysis of Deadly Thoughts



This may bring horror and pain
A thought can be all it takes
It only comes to the insane

The thoughts inside your brain
Can cause more than headaches
This may bring horror and pain

The patters of the rain
Will make you wish for breaks
It only comes to the insane

If you let these thoughts be the main
Your mind it overtakes
This may bring horror and pain

Even if it you detain
Then come the earthquakes
It only comes to the insane

Happiness comes to the sane
But if you seek higher stakes
This may bring horror and pain
It only comes to the insane


Scheme AbA abA abA abA abA abAA
Poetic Form Villanelle 
Metre 1111001 0111111 11011001 010111 11111 1111001 01101 111111 11011001 11111101 11110 1111001 1011101 1101 11011001 1001101 1111101 1111001 11011001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 552
Words 113
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

Villanelle written in Mr. Benders Language Arts Class

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Written on May 03, 2022

Submitted by amacho on May 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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