Analysis of My World

Nidhi 2008 (Jharkhand)



I close my eyes and find myself dreaming about a world
A world that none of you has seen,
A world that is peaceful and out of every pain.

A world where the sun is a planet
And the stars give us light
A world where water is blue
And where mosquitoes don't bite!

A world that is green
And whose every part is clean
A world that is slightly magical,
And where people fetch their dreams.

I've been dreaming about a world,
Not one of you has seen.

A world where everyone is equal
And where people don't discriminate,
A world that's happy and healthy
And where everyone is each other's mate.

A world where everyone is rich
 And where every occupation is respected;
A world that's safe
And where no one is subjected.

A world that's marvelous,
A world that's beautiful
A world that's astonishing
And whose every part is wonderful!

A world that's not mean
And where everyone's a king or a queen;
I've been dreaming about a world
Not one of you has seen.

But as soon as I open my eyes
I see the present world and realise
That I was just dreaming a lovely dream
A dream that none of you has seen!!


Scheme abx xcxc bbde AB dfxf xgxg xdxd bbAB xexb
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011100101 01111111 0111100111001 011011010 001111 0111011 0101011 01111 01100111 011110100 0110111 11100101 111111 01110110 01101010 01110010 011011101 0111011 011000101010 0111 01111010 011100 011100 0110100 0110011100 01111 011001101 11100101 111111 111111011 11010101 1111100101 01111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,096
Words 233
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on October 19, 2021

Submitted by imsavannahautumns on April 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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