Analysis of I'm death

HN MAVUSANA 2000 (Tembisa hospital)



I am death I come unexpectedly but perfectly when I am invited by thoughts deep in sorrows coursing a lot of pain I mean whisper options of death in their minds and be like Overdose to those with kind hearts, guns and ropes to those with brave ones An influencer of suicide more active in a room of break-ups When loneliness strikes I become the defender, remove your breath away from danger and get ready for ears that hear sad news. Funny part, for failures like having me as their thoughts suicide is my nickname.


Scheme A
Poetic Form
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Characters 516
Words 95
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 416
Words per line (avg) 95
Letters per stanza (avg) 416
Words per stanza (avg) 95
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Written on February 17, 2022

Submitted by mavusanadapoet78 on April 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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HN MAVUSANA

A young an black South African man: Bhekumuzi Mahomane is a 20-year-old who was born and raised at Mpumalanga, currently residing at Gauteng (Tembisa). He started writing poetry at the age of 17 in grade 10, then proceeded to reciting them within the same year. Amongst other things, his passion for writing supersedes that of his other talents such as dance and acting. He dreams to see his name amongst the greatest writers of all times who have played a part in inspiring him with their passion. The young man aims to get his name and work out there for the world to share in. more…

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