Analysis of A Fascinating Ride



Aging is a fascinating ride
From assumed invincibility
To undeniable fragility

On a road paved
With altering shades
Of awareness
Under an unpredictable sky -
Spanning from a vague sunrise
Through occasional rainbows
To an indisputable sunset

Marked by experience
Soft, shaded, or sharp
Crisp, cool, or cozy

Induced by
What we dreamed, dared, or did
Who we loved, loathed, or left
Within our bliss, bluff, or blast

On a cloud of impermanence
From invincibility
To fragility


Scheme XAA XBXCXXX XXA CXXX BAA
Poetic Form Etheree  (45%)
Metre 10101001 10100100 101000100 1011 11001 1010 10101001 101011 101001 1101001 110100 11011 11110 011 111111 111111 01101111 10111 100100 10100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 502
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 7, 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

A deliberation about the natural process of aging, and it's many facets

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Written on September 20, 2021

Submitted by Joamarq on May 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joan Marques

Joan Marques is an educational and social entrepreneur, who writes poetry as a balancing act to maintain mindfulness, spirituality and sanity in a hectic world. She has been widely published in scholarly and popular venues, and has (co-)authored and co-edited more than 35 books. Originally from Suriname, South America, Dr. Marques currently lives and works in Los Angeles, CA. more…

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