Analysis of Dead Poets

Boy with a pen 2001 (Assam)



This pen feels heavy now
Each stroke feels substantial
The poet in me has gone comatose
I punish myself with this pen

By writing words of love in empty white sheets
Words,  which I should be whispering  in your ears
But you are not here, you flowed away like the ink that flows in these empty sheets

I write with this heavy pen
Words of emptiness in empty sheets
These words echo within me , longing to get out of these vacant sheets


Scheme XXXA BXB ABB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111101 111010 010011110 1101111 11011101011 11111100011 1111111011011101101 1111101 111000101 11100111011111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 443
Words 90
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by Boywithapen on April 30, 2022

Modified on March 11, 2023

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