Analysis of Not Fair

K B Heatley 2022 (Lancashire)



It's even not fair trying to spell correctly
Not fair a prompt had to be directly
A zebra crossing... no one stops usually
It's not amusingly though accussingly
Completely unacceptable amenderatery

Have you even been took the xxxx of?
Then your brain becomes burning on fire, asking why?,why?,...
I try   try  
My my...

Money is my best friend
I pretend
I hate the fxxxin site of the gend

Hate life so what
Do you Not?...
I bet I know why..
You reading my xxxx you're loaded on the sly!

War here   war there  war everywhere watching the news lately
I'm sad for those people out there

I'm not so unfortunately grimly saddened or thin
just fed up within

Wana help.. yelp..to give a going chance to anyone seeking a glance
At a world we see that's messed up biggly!!!

My name..
is... Krissie


Scheme AAAAB XCBD EEE XXCD AB FF GA XG
Poetic Form
Metre 110111011010 1101111010 010101111000 11010011 01001001 111011011 1110110110101 111 11 101111 101 11011101 1111 111 11111 11011110101 1111110100110 11111011 11101000101011 11101 111101011101001 101111111 11 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 814
Words 172
Sentences 15
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 3, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

I am like everyone individual human being things do not seem fair.

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Written on April 28, 2022

Submitted by krissie_l on April 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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