Analysis of the no eating and drinking

jabir 2008 (seattle)



I wake up in the middle of the night
I eat food and drink a lot of water
I chill and watch some tv
Then I brush my teeth and went back to sleep

I wake up again
I could not eat or drink
I chill for minute
It was challenging

I go outside
To waste sometime
Playing with my friends
And feeling wind on me

I come back home
Its almost time
To eat some food
So, I wait for it

It is time
When we all eat
Having a good time
With my family


Scheme XXAX XXXX XBXA XBXX BXBA
Poetic Form Etheree  (50%)
Tetractys  (35%)
Metre 1110010101 1110101110 1101111 1111101111 11101 111111 11110 11100 1111 111 10111 010111 1111 111 1111 11111 111 1111 10011 11100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 456
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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about not eating or drinking

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Written on April 26, 2022

Submitted by 1jaabdi on April 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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