Analysis of Do I Still Bloom



Beauty strikes the soul. God within
Time passes the twigs grow
Roses deep in the ground die with winter
Spring alive after the haunt of the snow
Trees die. Sacred with the winter blues
The spring again life again does begin
I see a heavenly beautiful moody blue sky
I ponder - life a wonder and the muse play
I hope theres a break of reality today
Realism - I see. I live like I die
I test the waters . my mind quite contraire
My eyes wander they seek the heavenly father
And may God take my soul to the skies
Blessed be !  When each day I give my broken heart
A chance to mend for the stars
I recollect the chosen time be at Gods whim.
And may I beat the odds to live each day
With the perfect harmony of love by my side
I pray my God my soul might be self pride.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 765
Words 157
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 597
Words per stanza (avg) 159

About this poem

Death becomes me too young in life. I just recently lost a pet....Joys of my life. I outlived him tho. "How do I mend a broken heart? " I had surgery for a broken mitral valve. Well I'll be 2 1/2 years since. Im alive

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Written on March 10, 2022

Submitted by staci100 on March 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Stacey Law

Been a poet for almost 20 years. Loved its serenity at times. Keeps its place with God more…

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