Analysis of Stitches and Twine



I was born with a broken heart though it's all whole now it was once torn apart
They put me back together and mended me up just fine
With stitches and Staples and a little bit of twine

My heart is big and I wear it on my sleeve
I care to much I dream and I believe
I try to hard to help others in need ill care for you cry for you and sometines even bleed

My heart is my weakness my scars run deep it's the price I pay and it's never cheap
For every soul that I help bring peace
It either lifts me up or it pulls be Beneath

I have highs and I have my lows I have many allies and I have many foes
I have many battles some I lose some I win
With the stitches and twine they will sew me up again

stitches and twine
7-21-18
Donald Elmore


Scheme XAA BBX XXX XXX AXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010111111111101 11110100101111 1100100010111 11110111111 1111110101 1111111001111111101101 11111011111011101101 1100111111 110111111101 11101111111010011101 111010111111 1010011111101 1001 1 1010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 738
Words 162
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

About being born with a broken heart.

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Written on July 21, 2018

Submitted by pleiades2112 on April 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Donald Clay Elmore

51 year old farther of 2. Married for 31 years have 2 grandsons. I play the guitar and bass, wight music and a few poems. more…

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