Analysis of The 8th Deadly Sin



Caught between
fear and despondency
it came as two trains
passing in the night
 with him on the center rail
too frozen to choose
too barren to cry
too orphaned to commit
hearing the screams
from the dying polarity
tearing him from the center
of his emptiness
daring him to move
while forcing him to stay
the 8th deadly sin beset…
D-E-S-P-A-I-R-I-N-G
with the sound of the fury
the pressure and the heat
sucking out the last vestige
of the man he had been
before all hope gave in to fear

(Septa’s R5: March, 2022)


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Poetic Form
Metre 101 100100 11111 10001 1110101 11011 11011 110101 1001 10100100 1011010 11100 10111 110111 01110101 1111011111 1011010 010001 1010110 101111 01111011 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 520
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 21, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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