Analysis of I don't want to live without you



Why did you do this?
Why did you break your promise?
Why did you say you were going to stay?
And then you left me all alone

Look at me now
Look at how I feel without you
Hoping that you'd come back
But realizing you won't

I hate you
For making me feel so attatched to you
For making me love you a lot
And then laying dead in my arms

The day you leayed in my arms and said
That my life is more precious
But do you know
It's not my life without you in it

We spent long nights
Making midnight memories
Now I spend long nights
Crying

Please come back
Please don't make me feel so alone
Please come back
And takee with you


Scheme xaxb xcdx ccxx xaxx exex DbDc
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1111110 1111101011 01111101 1111 11111011 101111 110011 111 110111111 11011101 01101011 011101101 1111110 1111 111101101 1111 101100 11111 10 111 11111101 111 0111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 625
Words 137
Sentences 4
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by sarahafzalalijune on March 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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