Analysis of Listen Lord, Please Listen Lord!



Listen Lord, Please Listen Lord! I feel as though I can not weep no more. The price I paid for giving up my soul has my life spinning like revolving doors.

Listen Lord, Please Listen Lord! This pain I bear, I fear, I take no more. My faith in you I shall uphold for sure. Please guide my path of life to you once more.

Listen Lord, Please Listen Lord! The truths I seek I shall not seek no more. The life you gave for me to live I thank you for. In you I trust forever more.

Listen Lord, Please Listen Lord! I feel as though I can not weep no more. This pain I bear, I fear, I take no more. The truths I seek I shall not seek no more.

Listen Lord, Please Listen Lord! In you I trust forever more. My faith in you I shall uphold for sure. Please guide my path to you once more.

Listen Lord! Please Listen Lord! The life you gave for me to live I thank you for. The price I paid for giving up my soul, has my life spinning like revolving doors.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011101111111111101111101111111010101 1011101111111111111011101111111111111 1011101011111111101111111111101110101 1011101111111111111111111110111111111 101110101110101110111011111111111 101110101111111111101111101111111010101
Characters 947
Words 204
Sentences 23
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 119
Words per line (avg) 32
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

Just wanted to write a poem to God asking him to listen. Whilest expressing my feelings and gratitude for him. Although I have fallen many times I still have my faith in God And yet life revolves like a spinning door.

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Written on March 26, 2022

Submitted on March 26, 2022

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Justin L Williams

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