Analysis of Love in the Broken
Time seems to almost stop,
me in your arms,
your lips on my neck softly.
Sometimes I wonder,
what life would've been,
if I hadn't ran,
hadn't told of the horrors,
happening behind closed doors.
Stuck in a painful daze,
as cold filled the room I felt safe in.
Getting used to the cold freezing me,
the aching as the cold turned,
to numbing the wounds that,
would soon to scar.
I wanna spend my life with you.
Wake up from terrors of nights,
you there next to me,
to help me forget the horrors,
of the broken past.
Of the betraying love of someone,
you had called father.
The one who was supposed to love.
Not hurt and brake.
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIECJKLMNCGOPDQR |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 1011 1111110 01110 11101 11101 1011010 1000111 100101 111011110 101101101 0101011 110011 1111 11011111 1111011 11111 11101010 10101 10010111 11110 01110111 1101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 628 |
Words | 142 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 23 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 478 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 120 |
About this poem
This is a poem that I made when I was thinking about how my fiance' makes me feel. I could never show him this though.
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Written on March 12, 2022
Submitted on March 12, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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