Analysis of he



Tears rolled down my cheeks
In a world so big
I was alone
Until he found my hand
And I knew it was okay to feel this way
I wish I knew it would only be for that day

We became close, he and I
Days spent alone
Talking to the sky
By then he had my heart
My soul in his clutch
He had taken too much

The days became darker
Tears stopped rolling down my cheeks
I knew I would finally be free
I said my words and talked to the sky
I knew it was time
Goodbye.


Scheme AXBXCC DBDXEE XAXDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 00111 1101 011111 0111111111 111111101111 1011101 1101 10101 111111 11011 111011 010110 1110111 111110011 111101101 11111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 454
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Written on February 10, 2022

Submitted by samjenfitz on March 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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