Analysis of for you MY child



Would you take a journey with me
  a journey that is bitter-sweet
close your eyes, now picture the end
  of a long and narrow street.
There is a hill with people gathered round.
  A man upon a cross is what you've found.
His feet are pierced through with a spike
         His body ripped
    His hands by nails secure.
His head a crown of thorns surround,
    within His eyes a glorious message said
            " for you My child
          I hang here in your stead "


Scheme ABCBDDEFGDHIH
Poetic Form
Metre 11101011 01011101 11111001 1010101 1101110101 0101011111 11111101 1101 111101 11011101 01110100101 1111 111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 474
Words 92
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 330
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Written on January 29, 1977

Submitted by novstar76 on February 15, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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