Analysis of Eight Second Win



Now the Cowboys hit the road again,
chasing the dream of that eight-second win.
They drive for miles to various towns;
finding their nerve in a loud, screaming crowd.
The events separate the men from the boys;
they try to hang on until that shrill whistle noise.
The rough stock ridden is unforgiving;
bucking and swooping, whirling and spinning.
When one rides well and gets the high score;
plucking a check is nothing to ignore.
Before they can leave or call it a night;
drinking is a must! To a bar they will drive.
Some will find a cute buckle bunny;
dancing, touching, and calling her yummy.
Others will head straight to the bar;
tossing a buddy the keys to his car.
At closing time, most won’t be sober;
wishing they’d parked their rig a bit closer.
Morning comes and all are hung over;
finding new pain in their hips, knees or shoulders.
Bruised and broken the profession is rough;
knowing that kind of pain, cowboys are tough.
Yet, forever they’ll ride, clear ‘til the end.
Thirsting the dream those eight seconds win.


Scheme ABCDEEFFGGHIJJKKLLLMNNOB
Poetic Form
Metre 10110101 1001111101 111111001 1011001101 0011001101 111110111101 0111010010 1001010010 111101011 1001110101 0111111101 10101101111 111011010 1010010010 10111101 1001001111 110111110 1011110110 101011110 10110111110 1010001011 101111111 1010111101 10111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,047
Words 206
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 805
Words per stanza (avg) 183

About this poem

I wrote this poem many, many years ago for a cowboy I once loved who loved the rodeo more than he loved me.

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Written on October 18, 2004

Submitted by amandabunyard on February 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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