Analysis of Edit



Waking up to reality
Originality bruised
Words pressed
preserved the form juiced
Forlorn and lost
The motion taunted
A movement wasted
Opportunity lost then won
When the edit is done
Truth impossible
The mind in fragments falls
What moods have passed
Time will erase all


Scheme ABCADEFGGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 101110 001001 11 01011 0101 01010 01010 0100111 101011 10100 010101 1111 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 272
Words 47
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Written on March 03, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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