Analysis of My Daughter Carol

Elizabeth Winters 2948 (California)



March 2nd 1970, born to me a second daughter so tiny and sweet, we did not know at first her life would end in her mid 20es. She left behind a son a wee one only 6 years old, now a man. With a wife and child of his own. One night Carol went to sleep her Heart was to weak, Carol was never to wake again. Her father died 7 years after we lost. Carol berried side by side in Riverside. Till we meet again my sweet child till we meet again.


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Characters 437
Words 93
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 334
Words per line (avg) 93
Letters per stanza (avg) 334
Words per stanza (avg) 93

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Our second daughter of 5 daughters had a heart condition, she had a miscarriage 2 weeks before her passing the antibiotics wasn't strong enough to help her heart not to get infection . A year later to the day I lost my mother

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Written on February 23, 2022

Submitted on February 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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