Analysis of You win
Even when I felt like dying
You made me feel the most alive
Even when I wanted to give up you showed me who i truly
Was
Beyond all the sadness, hurt,trauma, pain,and even all the suffering
You showed me I am human
And me feeling doesn't exclude me from everyone else
But shows how I'm just like everyone else
And that even with all I've been through I deserved love
And then the person I would give the world
Took it away from me
And showed me all their hope for me was what they used against me,
I thought you made me free
But in all reality
I was better off being locked down
I thought the best of you and that's how you hurt me
You got me to show you myself in a valuable state and that's when
You attacked
Funny huh
How love makes you see all the good
That you completely overlook the flaws
I let you see that part of only for you to lie to me
And guess what I got out of it
Nothing but having to return to the person i was when we met
Sad, hurt,in pain, and suffering all over again
And yet I still wonder how you've been
You win
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Metre | 10111110 11110101 1011101111111110 1 011010111010100 1111110 0110100111101 111111101 0110111111011 0101011101 110111 011111111111011 111111 10110 111011011 110111011111 1111111001001011 101 101 11111101 110101001 111111110111111 01111111 10110101101011111 111010011001 011110111 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,034 |
Words | 217 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 27 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 808 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 213 |
About this poem
a person who can use your pain against you after they made you feel the most alive.
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Written on February 17, 2022
Submitted by Itselle on February 17, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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