Analysis of The Value in Me



Only a wish or vision that postponed
Something which doesn’t appeared in realty
Oh! Disappeared or vanished in despair
It became morally corrupt
How painful when touched the real pain
Distressed or angry inside

To sink in the middle of shallow
To hang on sideways under pressure
To give up or blow to burst with a loud voice
Burst into unrestrained false laughter
It remain only wish, wish

I am sure I have a big value in my heart
They tried to sell me in a big market
Nothing that worth the value in me


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Poetic Form
Metre 1001110101 1011010100 101110001 10110001 11011011 0111001 110010110 11111010 11111111011 10101110 1011011 111110110011 1111100110 101101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 507
Words 97
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 32

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That was unspeakable hard time of my life. I tried to overcome it with tact. I knocked every door for job search, regardless my qualification and work experience all was in vain.

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Submitted by yeshigemaneh on February 08, 2022

Modified on March 06, 2023

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Yeshiembet/Yeshi Gemaneh

I was born and raised in Eastern parts of Ethiopia in the city of Harar, I was attended elementary and secondary school in Haile Selassie Day School in Addis Ababa. I remember when I was in grade 7, I won a prize for being the best student - a book "Alice in Wonderland," from Emperor Haile Selassie, King of Ethiopia. From High School, I was rewarded scholarship for higher education on City Administration, and Social Studies in the cities of Luneburg, Aachen and Dusseldorf, West Germany. I had also a humble opportunity of learning Western culture, German language and associated closely with hard working German people. My fascination and love for poems goes many years back, when I was in grade 7, one day our English teacher read, "Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star ...," since then I wanted to write poems. In 1995 I had an opportunity to join, The International Library of Poetry. Since then I expressed on variety of topics or titles; I call it my ABC poems. I see my life experience as my greatest teacher, and I love to share what I have had acquired over many years with others, however, every day I am a learner. It is my strong belief and philosophy, if a person has interest and willpower can achieve his goal. As a child, my important figure was my mother. She taught me the Ethiopian alphabets, and love of family and surroundings that helped me to see many things positively. Unfortunately, despite my wonderful childhood experience and growth; I encountered many ups and down of life journey that too taught me a lesson. Now, I am in my senior years being old is wisdom. There is a saying, "quitters are losers," and I don't want that to apply on me. more…

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