Analysis of The Revelation

Nicolaas Smit 1979 (Johannesburg)



Fearful expression like a mirror
In the face of one you adore
Reveals a surfaced fiend
Manifested deep within
Your own misguided spirit

Where did you pick up this hitch hiker
Which forbidden road did you roam
Where troubled beings dwell
Scouting for open doorways
Unwelcome they shuffle in

If you are not like all the others
Are you still only like yourself
Or are you pretending
To be afire with much more
Than the fuel you keep allows

How sharp a sword would you acquire
To sever your core from the dark
That's blinded you for days
And hidden from you your blessings
That God has laid before you

Would it take a less tainted spirit
To intervene uninvited
And reveal to you faith
As great as a mountain
Which you have failed to notice

One you, as someone else's hero, have already conquered


Scheme ABXCD AXXEC XXXBX AXEXX DXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 100101010 00111101 010101 100101 1101010 111111110 11001111 110101 101101 0101100 111111010 11110101 111010 1101111 10101101 110111010 11011101 110111 01011110 1111011 111011010 101010 001111 111010 1111110 11111010101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 796
Words 150
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

The poem is a reflection of self-discovery, when you realise that your younger self, although being imperfect and full of flaws, was merely your current self in training, and in order to embrace the stronger, wiser version of yourself, you need to set your old self free.

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Written on December 12, 2014

Submitted by nickcsmit on January 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nicolaas Smit

Born in Johannesburg, South Africa in 1979, I am a published poet as well as a singer/songwriter for the punk band, Pennydrop. Besides the abovementioned I have always been open to various forms of art and have played small roles in local television drama's as well as music videos. more…

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