Analysis of My Thoughts...



    One day while I was alone, and time was passing by, I thought about my life, and about the day I die.
     Would the end come while still light, or would it take me in the dark? Did I accomplish things in life, did I even leave my mark?
     Was I good to other people? To the one's I dearly love. Did I try to follow rules, given by the man above?
     Did I do my very best, to be the person that I should? Will their memories of me be all bad instead of good?
     Then I thought of time that's left, and how to leave without these fears, I should change the things I need to, and use time wisely while I'm here.


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Words 129
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
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Letters per line (avg) 90
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This poem, "My Thoughts", I wrote one day while sitting alone and simply reflecting on my life, thinking about the "did I's" and the "what if's".

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Written on December 29, 2021

Submitted by hugheslynn44 on January 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lynn Therese Hughes

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