Analysis of ERES MI FINAL INFELIZ



You keep wondering what else you needed to do to make me fall in love with you.
Well, the answer is clear...nothing.
and if you hate me I don't blame, you because you did more than perhaps I deserved.
I know you didn't see this coming like the sudden rain on a beautiful sunny day.
You don't know how sorry I am that you have been one more victim of my fucking cold feelings, just think that you gave everything and I wasn't the one, that will ease the pain and even make you feel better...don't cry anymore and be happy, meanwhile I will get overwhelmed and pay more than enough for not having given you the opportunity to be everything.


Scheme ABCDB
Poetic Form
Metre 11100111101111110111 101011 01111111101111101101 1111011101010110100101 11111011111111101110110111111001100111101010111110101101111010111011110101001001110
Characters 638
Words 127
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 99
Words per line (avg) 24
Letters per stanza (avg) 497
Words per stanza (avg) 121

About this poem

This is one of my many poems that I wrote in my hours of melancholy and anguish, it may not be the best mood to write but it is there when ideas flow to me to write each stanza of my poems.

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Written on October 11, 2019

Submitted by yesseniamilagrosjacintoherrera on January 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Yessenia Milagros Jacinto Herrera

I am from Peru - Lima, 23 years old, graduated from the Education Sciences career at the Hermilio Valdizán National University. more…

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