Analysis of Young Lovers

Roshny 1974 (Vista)



Gardenia bushes yawn under the moonlight
cool breeze spreads waves of inebriating scent.

Young lovers tiptoed away from parental view
love knows no bed time, no schedules.

Late night hugs and kisses on a cold park bench
guardian angels watch delighted
as they high-five each other, another love-match.

No cold breeze or drizzle can deter young hearts
from stolen moments of loving whispers
star-eyed under the moon-  kisses and cold shivers
as warm arms alley the chill of night-
for these two young lovers.


Scheme AX XX XXX XBBAB
Poetic Form
Metre 0101011001 1111101001 11010110101 11111110 11101010111 100101010 111111001011 11111010111 1101011010 111001100110 111100111 111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 511
Words 91
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 5
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Love, two young hearts and the magic of night, stolen hugs and kisses in a park.

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Written on September 03, 1973

Submitted by Roshny on January 13, 2022

Modified by Roshny on January 15, 2022

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I believe life is poetry, we should be able to express what's in our hearts freely. Each one of us views life differently at different times. I find reading other's work provides a window into their heart and soul. more…

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