Analysis of Spirit of the feminine

Shireen Munshi 2005 (Uttar pradesh)



Divinity pure; soul is suffocated
Woman and man are indeed discriminated
Snatching my organs, pulling my roots
For them I am just a lewd juice

Beads of my necklace are broken
But the thread is sacred as tied
They dominate, expecting to accepting
Haven't they heard of the lioness rising

Their fingerprints on my body
Their name followed by mine
Fathers and husbands; sons and brothers
Stepping on their weakened lovers

Rising from ashes, a living from dead
Fiery essence with ruth in the eye
Aura of a goddess, smile as heavenly charisma
We are the origin of life and balancers of karma

Dazzling celeste time to equate
Finishing the patriarchy rule
Seated on the throne; love bestowed
Diminished dominance, sattva atmosphere approached


Scheme XXXX XXAA XXBB XXCC XXXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 0100111100 10011010100 101101011 11111011 11110110 10111011 1100101010 101110110 1101110 111011 100101010 10111010 1011001011 1001011001 10101011100010 1101001101110 100011101 10001001 10101101 01010011001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 744
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

This poem is about the ignored aspects happening to women and what she thinks and perceives about men and herself.

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Written on December 30, 2021

Submitted by shireen7667 on December 30, 2021

Modified by shireen7667 on December 31, 2021

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