Analysis of Thanks

Ralph Cow 1982 (Pacoima)



I know your still with me. I can feel it in my bones. My body shakes, my blood is bowling. I’m getting there an you show. You make me look foolish. You take me out the norm. I start walking around, pacing. With nothing good to show. I’m glad your not holding. I would keep to myself an cope. You know what they used to tell us, when we were kids. There’s no hope in that (dope). Do you really have to fallow. Your there all the time. I’m telling you, your the reason. I’m going around telling everyone, I’m fine. I hate people, I can say it to there face. With you bye my side, I can’t look them in the eyes. Without making change that same look in there face. We cant be together, your not what you think. I have to be alone. You’ll do good without me. I’m glad you understand. Now you may go.


Scheme A
Poetic Form
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Characters 812
Words 159
Sentences 24
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 593
Words per line (avg) 159
Letters per stanza (avg) 593
Words per stanza (avg) 159

About this poem

Your all-ways there……. Anger

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Written on December 26, 2021

Submitted by Ralphcow on December 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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