Analysis of Milkway of life
Trenton Scott Thorpe 1990 (Vanderburg)
Milkyway: Life is hard dieing easy,
pain in my eyes love in my heart, suicide on my mind,
may just- ice change it to a homicide,I'm sick of these homicidal thoughts,
Peace of mind can't be bought devil hopeing he dont get caught,
its okay tho got jesus in my life pride in my heart future in my mind now im feeling the present so ima keep on gridding keep my hustle tight,
breathing the night air in taste so Krispy good no longer in the hood life I gots me a wife,
no innocent blood stain on my knife,
just my enemies that be drinking that syrup
whiskey life wont get you a women just blood on your knife, then that's you letting them win,
don't do it my friend,
you better think twice and get off the spice Its not so sugary and nice, power puff
ya I'm talking doctor mojo who runs the show for a while now that's why he's on dis track
but let get back to dragon tales or when the man got stuck in a whale lieing with wood tell him lies tring to cut ties with
old jack who kicked the pail and fell down the hill with Phill me now
And spilled his meds right in front of the feds
Now the false start we had is gone now it's time to get his mind right in the bar motel not getting fed haveing no bed or bail MoMA cuttem off rebel in the heat sand burns feet as the other pair fades I'm gripping the steering wheel tight until dawn over comes the day
i myself will not fail i do or not have a life with you my care bear who cant help but to stare , I might be an artist but I'm but I'm isn't conning you but forever keeping it 100 while I'm Painting a picture of your lost vaccant soul that bleeds through my veins that way when u understand you will believe not just see my love and May u soon call apon the Lord save your mind cause if u believe it you can achieve it so I forever toss my soul out to guide yours ..Im lucky AKA
Care bear you have the goldest blue milkyway eyes i ever seen "legendary"no human on earth deserve to see such an accient soul "Train" burst trough the drought as I get lost in your pupils
the greatest gift , in my life besides my son who shines so bright that any could find there way back and only until i get shot in the head or found dead "line".i will no longer be trap into infinty beyond buzz "lightyear"
I will returned to the milky way in your heart were i shall reside until you find me playing with your nerves like a harp and listening to the echos of your soul.......mate by Trenton Thorpe
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Characters | 2,479 |
Words | 506 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 12 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 95 |
Words per line (avg) | 26 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 946 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 260 |
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From the mind ,body and soul
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Written on December 26, 2021
Submitted by phoenixfire4455 on December 26, 2021
Modified on April 17, 2023
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