Analysis of Salute to the New Year.

Brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



This year has gone,
Salute to the new year,

On new year day
Keep spreading new light,
May my Country prosper
With blessings,
May be new every enthusiasm,
May be new every wave,

Farewell to the old hopes,
Salute to the new breath........

New year morning will be
Celebrated with new celebration,
With new successful ideas,
May the new be faith,
Forget the old enmity
On the name of new friendship,

Farewell to the old memories,
Salute to the new year.........

This year has gone,
Salute to the new start...........


Scheme AB xxxxxx xx cxxxcx xB Ax
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1111 011011 1111 11011 111010 110 1111000100 1111001 11011 011011 111011 10011010 11010010 10111 0101100 1011110 1101100 011011 1111 011011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 518
Words 110
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 6, 2, 6, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Long back I wrote this poem in Hindi, it was a song, if I don't forget it was written during 1970, I worked hard to translate in English exactly not the same but because of English put I was forced to add different stanzas for English put. I will be pleased to know if it is liked by the viewers.

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Submitted by brijmohanp.51277 on December 26, 2021

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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