Analysis of It time to cook

Flora poole 1982 (Hagerstown, md)



It time to cook
Cook it up
Place it on the stem
Light it up
Smoke it
Let's not forget to inhale it
Take another piece place it on the stem
Do the same thing over and over again
Can you feel it yet
It sneaking up on you
It's making you paranoid
Looking out the windows
Making you see stuff that not even really there
Time for another fix to soothe out the pain
Time to wait for it to be delivered
So you can place another hit on that stem
Make sure this time you take a bigger better blast than before
Can you feel it yet
If not than why the fuck are ya so paranoid
Looking out the windows
Looking at things that not really there
Time to take another hit cause ya think ur not High enough
Does it make your pain and hurt go completely away
Or is it another temporary pain reliever
Does it make you do all sorts of things besides being paranoid
And seeing shit that not even really there
Let's take another hit
Time to clean up the mess
Least that what I did
When I use too take my hits
It didn't make me paranoid and shit
It made me have energy
And I thought it helped me to forget the pain,
Hurt ,and trauma I went through
But it was making me lose weight
To fast and to quickly
So finally I took what was my last blast ever and smoked it up
Got clean and been clean ever since
Go on who do you think  your fooling
Keep taking your hits and smoking it in a stem
Keep thinking  it best for you
Cause in all reality
It makes you paranoid
And look deathly sick
Take it from me I done been through alot of shit
That most wouldn't make it out to tell
About so go on its ok
You think no one loves you
And you are suffering with everything alone
Take a step back remember the life you once had
And remind yourself is it so bad that you wanna end it all
Put that stem down
Walk away
Get away from those whose doing nothing but aging it on
Throw the stem out
Get a better high
A better high  on love
You deserve way more than that and
Put that stem down
You don't need it
Go get help
Love yourself.
For loving yourself
And putting your life first
Will be rewarded to you in the long run
Stop taking those hits
Stop being a paranoid little bitch
You don't need it
Put that stem down
Throw it away .
Let's start over in life
If I can do it you sure the fucking hell can
Don't take another blast
Don't make your life fade away
Come on now
Your. Better than that
Put that stem down
It time you called it quits
And learn to love yourself
Put yourself first
And whoever else
Fuck that stem
That will make you lose the ones you love
And there no ands ifs,is, buts,about it
Walk away from it
It's not worth it
Oh Put that stem the fuck down
And let it be and alone
Here on out

Written by : Flora Poole Flora Poole Flora Poole Flora Poole  aka violet poole


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,795
Words 612
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 89, 1
Lines Amount 90
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,078
Words per stanza (avg) 282

About this poem

It's about when people cook drugs or do drugs and change their life for the best

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Written on December 21, 2021

Submitted by flora_p on December 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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