Analysis of I wish

Sonja Salinas 1988 (Alice)



i wish i never knew what it is to love this much
save me the pain of heartache
i wish i never saw u cube thru that door
having to realize this was all fake
i have u me wheel and pulled the clutch
and now it's in peices shattered on the floor.

i wish i never knew what it was too hurt this deep
to understand how a dying soul feels pain
to have the yearning feeling of wanting the final leap
i wish i would have known that this was the wrong lane.


Scheme ABCBAC DEDE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111011111111 110111 11110111111 101101111 111110101 0110110101 1111011111111 1011010111 11010101100101 111111111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 448
Words 98
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 4
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 175
Words per stanza (avg) 48

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I gave my vicious love to the wrong one

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Written on October 12, 2021

Submitted by lexyann1989 on December 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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