Analysis of Mended Lines



Are you ready?

Do you feel it?

Those mended lines in your broken heart
Becoming whole and one
Pressed together with love
I am going to love you
As a woman is to be loved

I will press those broken pieces back together
Slowly, carefully, respectfully
Showing caution for what they have been through
Taking time to move each piece
Until the heart is one – whole and beating fierce

The warmth will spread
Slowly, uncertainly, snail-like
Until it begins to fill your form
Invading your conscious mind
Until you are fully aware

Are you ready?

To be loved?


Scheme A x xxxbc xabxx xxxxx A c
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1111 110101101 010101 101011 1110111 10101111 111110101010 101000100 1010111111 1011111 01011110101 0111 10010011 011011111 0101101 01111001 1110 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 558
Words 109
Sentences 5
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 5, 5, 5, 1, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 14

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broken hearts made whole

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Submitted by Themadpoet1969 on December 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jerry Cassidy

As old as the earth, and as young as the stars..A warrior poet of wit and wisdom, heavily spiced with sarcasm at times. more…

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