Analysis of il nostro primo appuntamento



He didn't beleive in feeding woman
whom may not find him
favorible
it just didn't seem right.
She knew he believed this, but she agreed to date him.
Well they went to " The Mousse Castle" there they were tabled, and waited.
she didn't order thinking he'd order for her. when the supper came it was four plates.
He grouped them in front of him,
and asked will you be fixing breakfast after our
long night of loving?
She anwsered
"hell no" he sat there and ate, she sat watching.
when he was finshed he told he she
could ride in the truck
if the tire would move over for her..
she did just that and when he got home, he said I pray you
have enough for a taxi, it gets cold in the barn.
honey I am tired of this stop acting mean.
He told her, then what constitutes a relationship, might one act dumb of being human. Might nights with someone you desire from visual aspects seek you same,
than to tell me that being stubborn is mean.
What creates trust that those words of now
starts when.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101010 11111 1 111011 1110111101111 1111011011010010 110101011010101011111 1110111 0111110101010 11110 11 11111011110 11111111 11001 1010111010 11110111111111 1011010111001 101110111101 110111000101111110101111101011001111 11111101011 101111111 11
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 986
Words 203
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 764
Words per stanza (avg) 191

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he took the bassoon from the truck to make room for me.

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Submitted by allanterry542curtis on December 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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