Analysis of I choose to be yours

Desmond muzite 2002 (Rusape)



oh lord l am a foreigner in this world
l don't know the good or the bad but I will just live as l was inspired by the people of this world. let them not expect me to be good when they rised me up in evil

l have no one to help me when I fall down or to tell about my problems, l have no one to wipe the tears  that is on my eyes as you can see weeping and suffering become a part of my life. friends l have many but sometimes l miss them when l am suffering that's why today I kneel down and tell you about my grievances
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l have given my up all my evil deeds and have committed myself to be yours. l will try to bring out the truth in every lie . l will open the eyes and the minds of those who have been blinded by the works of darkness


Scheme XX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110100011 1110110111111111010101011111101111111111010 1111111111111101110111111011111111111001000101111111101011111111001101111011011100 1 1110111110101010111111111101010011110010011111110101110
Characters 740
Words 165
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 3
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 113
Words per line (avg) 33
Letters per stanza (avg) 283
Words per stanza (avg) 82

About this poem

Who else can we trust expect God

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Written on December 11, 2018

Submitted by obammarbarrier on December 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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