Analysis of You gave us the earth.



You gave me the earth
and you taught me to learn.
As I grew in gerth
your heavens I yearn.

It hurt me without
You healed me within.
The deeper I saw
the more air grew thin.

The animals small
the forests a target.
For some its their all
while others - for market.

Snow covers the ground
though wars are forgotten
the gales grow profound
but man is still smitten.


Scheme ABAB XCXC DEDE FGFG
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11101 011111 11101 11011 11101 11101 01011 01111 01001 010010 11111 110110 11001 111010 01101 111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 365
Words 81
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Living was giving.

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Written on December 07, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on December 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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