Analysis of Relationship
By : Abdel Qader Ayyad (Egypt - Sinai)
Translation by :Hassan Hegazy (Egypt)
He stretches out his hands,
She moved forward.
He clasped his palms,
She smiled.
He loosened the button,
She summited.
He felt so much,
touched carefully, to start
his brave well-prepared step.
Cautiously, he went nearer and nearer,
Touched her with his thirsty lips,
He began to tremble, nothing
remained but one word,
she would disintegrate from him.
His eyes got strayed,
When he longingly hugged her.
He pulled the fuse, the rage exploded
inside her, it was kept in his heart
for long,, the night became day ,
colored with the day light,
filled the whole sky with flames and bright.
He embraced the shields of fire
with Longing, with deep desire,
A lot of pure shreds caught the fire,
painted the lines of the triumph
with dignity and inspire.
(The story of the love of tank and the hero soldier)
Scheme | XA XBXXXAXCX DXXBXXDXCXEE DDDXX D |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111101 010101110 110111 1110 1111 11 110010 11 1111 110011 111011 1001110010 1011101 10111010 01111 1101011 1111 1110010 110101010 010111011 1101011 101011 10111101 10101110 11011010 011111010 10011010 1100001 01010111001010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 910 |
Words | 187 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 9, 12, 5, 1 |
Lines Amount | 29 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 137 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
About this poem
The story of the love of tank and the hero soldier, written by the Egyptian poet ,Abdel Qader Ayyad (Egypt - Sinai),in Arabic and this is my translation in English . I hope it gains your satisfaction and approval, .Hassan Hegazy
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