Analysis of a burning heart

jocelynn johnson 2006 (brooklyn)



life hurts as it burns
i hit my head and pick up the urn,
how i miss you so why you left,
A emptiness inside
leave me dead,
killed and burn no one learns,
that me and you are always hurt,
as your breath had tremble down my neck,
we dance and dance till were in bed,
why you left me alone again,
alone for her again,
i can't complain,
i am filled with so much pain,
i wished you seen me in the rain,
i dance and dance my whole heart away,
until i fell and laid in pain,
my heart hurts with no space,
wheezing trembling breaths as i laid there,
a footstep your back here,
i love you why you left,
i hope we meet one day again.


Scheme ABCDEAFGEHHIIIJIKLMCH
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111101101 11111111 010001 111 101111 1101111 111110111 11011001 11110101 011001 1101 1111111 11111001 110111101 01110101 111111 1010011111 01111 111111 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 626
Words 151
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 474
Words per stanza (avg) 131

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a guy had left her for a mad and woman

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Written on December 03, 2021

Submitted by s9287369 on December 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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jocelynn johnson

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