Analysis of Horizon summer



The heat it shimmers the  horizon far
I glance the fuel slowly reaches low
Sands burning stretch beyond the distant hills
Sun and heat scream rage against my brow

Shall I  to my true love so fair
Or seek my fate in parts unknown nor seen?
We used to fit like
hand in glove we were
How far apart we've grown
How could this be?

I sense her eyes they search for me all day
Will I return or continue  north?
Desperately she longs for me and prays
I slow my car and contemplate this worth

I'll turn this car around and make for home
She waits for me with broken heart forlorn


Scheme XXXX XXXXXX XXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 0111000101 1101010101 1101010101 101110111 11111111 1111010111 11111 10110 110111 1111 1101111111 110110101 1000111101 111101011 1111010111 1111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 579
Words 124
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted by zengda on December 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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