Analysis of A silent half filled cup

Solacethepoet 2002 (South Africa)




The silent sob in my heart
gets louder at night.
All the thoughts and emotions
I relentlessly run from throughout
my days catch up at night.
With each passing moment
I cease to feel an ounce of
life within me.

As I stare at the ceiling
I think to myself....
"There was a time where I felt it all.
The rush, the smiles and happiness.
now I just feel emptiness, a void.
The emptiness of the void and it's
growth with each passing moment"


Scheme XAXXABXX XXXXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 0101011 11011 1010010 101001101 111111 111010 1111111 1011 1111010 1111 110111111 01010100 111110001 010010101 1111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 440
Words 95
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 7
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 42

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Ceasing to exist...

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Written on November 24, 2021

Submitted by Solacethepoet on December 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Solacethepoet

Solacethepoet is a writer in South Africa, a member of New Age Enlightenment. more…

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