Analysis of Come back to me



(Come back to me)

(Inside me)....
I see myself dying everyday.
Scared of the world, sitting inside myself with fear and pain.
Losing my existence everyday.
I have see myself turning into a devil.
I forgot to live like before.
I lost myself in the terrible world.
I'm praying to heavens to return my old time.
I'm  tired of fighting with myself.

(Me)....
I alwayes waiting for you.
I know you are in a lot of pain. And
I want to be a part of your pain.
I will forgiving you for hurting myself.
I know, i have done wrong in my past, and i can't go back and change it.
But, forget past, leave bad memories, forgive all our mistake. And can make a new beginning.
Please come back to me and go back to the old days with me.

(Inside me).....
Living like a puppet for the world, i hope that i will live like a devil.
I have thousand reasons to die and millions of tears to cry.
I want to cry someone's arms and want to say everything.
But, then i realise that, there is no one here to listen me.
I'm wandering alone in this dark world.
Time shift, dreams fade, ripples blur the illusion brush in hand, wishing for this letter to reach an old friend.

(Me).....
With a smile, asking the heavens to answer these relentless feeling,
But, years have passed in the blink of an eyes.
It doesn't matter if you don't want to accept my feeling.
It's okay if you are hate me,
But, please come back and stay by my side.
So, i can protect you, guard you from being hurt.
I can stand the pain, but i can't stand seeing you in pain.
Please come back to me, i will hide you keep safe away from the world,
I lost you once but don't want to lose you twice.

Written by - wibo


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 011 11110101 1101100111101 101010101 11111001010 10111101 111001001 110110101111 11011011 1 111011 1111001110 111101111 1101011101 11111101101111011 101111100011100101101010 11111011101111 011 1010101011111111010 111010110101111 111111011110 11111111111101 1100010111 1111101001010110111011111 1 10110010110101010 1111001111 110101111101110 1111111 111101111 111011111101 11101111110101 1111111111101101 11111111111 1011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,662
Words 368
Sentences 33
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 8, 7, 10, 1
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 206
Words per stanza (avg) 54

About this poem

Realising your existence.

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Written on November 19, 2021

Submitted by Wibo on November 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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