Analysis of Unstable Love



Astrological, probable
We were written in stars
Equine archery
Feathered flight
A love lobotomy
Strap me down
And now your riding me
To the water so I can see
Ripples of reflections
A prickled sky at night
Endless moments of perfections
A sudden disconnection
At the stench of horse shite


Scheme ABCDCECCFDBGD
Poetic Form
Metre 0100100 101001 1100 101 0110 111 011101 10101111 101010 01111 101011 010010 101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 291
Words 52
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 238
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted on November 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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