Analysis of My Misguided Love

Juan R. Alvarez 2021 (East Los Angeles)



My Misguided Love

My Misguided Love, that fits just like a glove.
     Trying hard not to fail, getting rough, Think I'll Bail.
     Trending hard and getting foggy, But my love is feeling kinda Soggy, So Misguided!
     Putting in work, to make a fresh new start, but still can't shake those same old thoughts
     Wake up early to start all over, looking for that four leaf clover
     Splash some water on the mirror, Then turn away, a single tear.
     Ready to try this Love once again and not to stray, hoping God to lead the way.
     Trying hard and I pray, But my inner child just wants to play!


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Poetic Form
Metre 10101 10101111101 101111101111 1010101011111010101010 100111011111111111 11101111010111110 1110101011010101 10111110101111011101 101011111011111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 601
Words 108
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 8
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 221
Words per stanza (avg) 54

About this poem

This poem expressed my frustration! Loving a women who loves everybody! But still I can't let her fully go ( 10 yr. Relationship).

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Written on July 05, 2021

Submitted by juanralvarez89 on October 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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