Analysis of Kingdom



Kingdom
SEP 2021

Days keeps passing by here I am staring at my phone
Keep checking dating profiles to match...tired of being alone
All I hear is people telling me the best has yet to come
For now I am just a man sitting on en empty throne inside his kingdom

Patiently awaiting for his queen to arrive to finally take his hand
And together they part into an adventure to the promise land
Daydreaming if the moment will ever come...often Iosing my mind
Sometimes when you at least expect it...things just happens with time

I want to believe that true because I know I have the qualities required on many checklist
Just need to filter the ones that will accept me for being "just me" the rest shall be demissed
People find me pretty selective and very picky... I find that amusing
Because you want the best for yourself and not content with accepting mediocrity

I prefer to be alone and wait the long road ahead even if it takes me a while
Better then accepting any takers and pretending to crack a smile
Just keep doing me and for the rest...there's a time and place for everything
One day someone is going to come along and make me feel like a king.


Scheme AX BBAA CCXX XCDX EEDD
Poetic Form
Metre 10 1 1110111110111 1101011111001 111110101011111 1111101101110101110 1000101111011100111 00101101101010101 1010101101111 01111101111011 111011101111101000101101 1111001110111101101111 10111001001010111010 011101101011010100100 1011101010110110111101 101010101000101101 1110101010101110 11111011010111101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,156
Words 219
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

To one day find the queen that ll make me feel like a king

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Written on September 11, 2021

Submitted by edilions on October 09, 2021

Modified on April 15, 2023

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