Analysis of Foolish Bride

James E. Spurgeon Jr. 1986 (New Jersey)



Why!!!
Squeeze my heart and strain my mind
Why!!!
1 time. Bang!! Another love crime
I despise this place, despicable in many ways
My heart, it aches
My pulse, just races
Heavy breath, heavy vibes
You said you love me
What did you see in my eyes
Touch me, tease me, feel me, and caress me
Hold on tight and don't let go
You got the best of me, I let it go
I did my best to let flow flow
Put my knees to the floor
Let my inhibitions go
Just so you would know….. that baby I'm for real
It's hard to express what I want without jest
At least in these lines because seriously
In-person, I've shown you each time
Why won't you be mine


Scheme AbAcdefghihjjjkjlmhcn
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1110111 1 1101011 1011101000101 1111 11110 101101 11111 1111011 1111110011 1110111 1101111111 11111111 111101 110101 11111110111 11101111011 11011011000 01011111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 610
Words 128
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 474
Words per stanza (avg) 128
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Written on August 11, 2019

Submitted by EhyehAsherEhyeh on October 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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