Analysis of Can't go on like these



You
Can't go on like this
Forever friend
Something has to change
You can't go on like this
Forever friend
Expecting me to pick up your tub
Every time you run out of money
You are using me for your own benefit friend


Scheme abCdbCefc
Poetic Form Nonet (33%)
Metre 1 11111 0101 10111 111111 0101 010111111 1001111110 111011111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 207
Words 43
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 171
Words per stanza (avg) 43

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That is an old poem Written by Aldo Kraas

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Written on September 29, 2021

Submitted by aldokraas093 on September 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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