Analysis of A Loss of Hope



Cloaked in darkness, ever black,
A pale wraith guards your prison,
Drowning in a pool of tears,
Chained down by the Threads of Fear,
With no hope to be risen.

Eons passed this hour's present,
A mighty warrior was known to all,
When victorious shadows held all bound,
A spark of Light, to hear its sound,
You came to those when they would call.

Through many battles, you've lead the way,
You've taught millions to be free,
You've let us think we'd go so far,
To even soar to foreign stars,
Or to build a home beneath the sea.

You have stood beside our heroes,
Who took us by the hand,
To help us see beyond our sight,
And take a stand for what was right,
Who said in vain, we'd never stand.

Once guarding like a wall of stone,
Against such enemies great and small,
As hate, and pain, and deep despair,
Which would stain our world like putrid air,
In wonder if one day to fall.

As the years went on, did you finally fall,
Is your mighty head held humbly low,
Do we now stand alone in vain,
Out in the cold, out in the rain,
While conquered by your greatest foes.

Are you forever bound to chains?
Does your imprisonment have no end?
Do we not call, do you not hear?
Has Hope lost itself in mankind's fears?
Or has man forgot a friend?


Scheme XAXXA XBCCB XDXXD EFGGF XBHHB BXIIE XJXXJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 0111110 1000111 1110111 1111110 10111010 0101001111 101001111 01111111 11111111 110101101 1110111 11111111 11011101 111010101 111011010 111101 111101101 01011111 11011101 11010111 011100101 11010101 1111011101 01011111 10111111001 111011101 11110101 10011001 11011101 11010111 110100111 11111111 111010111 1110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,197
Words 238
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on 1985

Submitted by Warbard on September 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Warbard

Poet & Philosopher, Soldier & Scholar, Warrior & Writer, Husband & Historian, Father & Freemason. Since the early '80s, Warbard has been a pen name for Shelby Chandler who is a historian and has made a home for his wife and four daughters in the area of Fredericksburg, Virginia. more…

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