Analysis of When I feel like a crime



When I feel like a crime, good and evil don't rhyme. I have a choice, now i have to make up my mind. What do I see? How do I feel? Some people say that crime doesn't pay, but if I can't afford a loaf of bread, why won't my brother feed me instead? So I have to think, here and there, my conscience is telling me just leave it there! When I feel like a crime, my heart so sad because what ive got is what someone else had. So i have to think day by day, how will i eat legally everyday.  When i feel like a crime, I just keep what's mine and follow my mind!


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Characters 556
Words 119
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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Letters per line (avg) 414
Words per line (avg) 120
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Feeling like doing something wrong.. then realized it's best to do what's right!

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Submitted by Thutmose on September 21, 2021

Modified by Thutmose on March 14, 2024

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