Analysis of The Rabbits of Your Affection



I remember hearing once in a class,

Or reading in a tattered dime-store Western,

That a man could starve to death eating rabbits.

No matter how many black-tipped jacks or

Small, plump cottontails one caught

If that was all he ate, there was not enough fat

To keep his body alive.

And, as I sit here under the old oak tree in the park

Writing and watching you harangue passers-by

To pick up their trash or put a leash on their dog,

I feel myself slowly wasting away

On the rabbits of your affection.


Scheme X X X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101001 11000101110 10111111010 1101101111 11111 111111111011 1111001 01111100111001 10010101101 111111101111 111101001 101011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 495
Words 96
Sentences 3
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

This poem was first published in 2021.

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Written on July 24, 2021

Submitted by pssteele84 on September 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Peter Steele

Peter Steele is an American poet and author from Utah. His other work can be viewed at www.psteelewriting.com and at https://www.facebook.com/petersteeleauthor/ more…

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